It’s my favorite time of year—Halloween! For a month (or maybe three) it’s socially acceptable (I think) to watch Hocus Pocus on a loop. Don’t judge me.
It’s also time for Susanna Leonard Hill’s 6th Annual Halloweensie Contest! To enter, you must write a 100-word-or-less Halloween story containing the words spider, ghost, and moon. Judging criteria include kid-friendliness, Halloweeniness, story quality, writing quality, and creativity/originality.
I encourage you to participate. It’s spooktacular fun! Read my entry below.
CREEPIDY CREEP
Spider’s ghost starts an All-Hallowed spook
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
On a boy who squished her with his boot
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
She skitters and scoots beneath the door
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
Slides sneaky across the moonlit floor
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
Spider spins her web up the bedpost
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
To haunt the boy she despises most
Creepidy creepidy creepidy creep
Beneath the covers she whispers:
“One, two—EEK!
“Creepidy creep…retreat!”
She nearly faints from his stinking feet.
Away Spider goes, pinching her nose.
The boy wiggles his toes.
Creepidy creepidy creepidy sleep.
This would be a lot of fun to read to a crowd of kids!
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Thank you, Julie! 🙂
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Was this written about my son? Great story that made me smile.
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Thank you, Gregory! It was inspired by all stinky-feet-spider squishers. 🙂
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Shayln,
a great read aloud and the stinky feet made me laugh!
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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The repetition is great, it’s suspenseful (I hate spiders) and funny, funny, funny!!! Still chuckling at the ending. 😀
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Thank you so much, Traci! So glad it got you chuckling 😛
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Fun and begging to be read out loud!
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Why thank you, Wendy!
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Shaelyn…this is so so so cute…I absolutely love the twist at the end…with the kid’s smelly feet. Kids will love this story. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian! And thank you for stopping by to read it 🙂
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This is so fun! I love the chant-i-ness of it and the stinky feet twist. And thanks for reminding me to get my Hocus Pocus looping!
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Thank you, Laura! And you are very welcome. Halloween just isn’t the same without the Sanderson Sist-AHs 🎃
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I love Hocus Pocus, too! And your story is a lot of read-aloud fun. Good luck!
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Thank you, Gabi! 🙂
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I love your repeating line-such fun to say-and how you modified it. Great ending too!
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Thank you, Linda!
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Shae! This is so stinkin’ cute! haha I seriously did not mean to make a pun! I love it! Especially the creepidy creepidy refrain. So fun! 🙂
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Ha, love the pun. Thank you, Kizzi! 🙂
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This is such a funny, kid friendly story that makes you laugh out loud. Great job!
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Thank you, Jean!
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Really fun language for a read-a-loud! Loved it!
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Thank you, Judy!
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Funny little Halloween tale, with great rhythm too!
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Thank you, Michelle! Happy Halloween 🎃
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Such fun! I wish book was in my hands to read every year😃 Wonderfully done, Thank you~Yvette
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Thank you, Yvette! Your comment made me smile 🙂
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What fun! Who would have thought of stinky feet to get rid of the spider ghost. I love the repetition. Kids would love it too.
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Thank you, Norah! 🙂
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Delightful entry, Shae! Love the fun-to-read-aloud repetition, spider’s attempt at revenge, and the fact that she’s foiled by those stinky feet yet again! Poor spider! It doesn’t seem fair 🙂 Thanks so much for joining in the Halloweensie fun! (ANd I have never seen Hocus Pocus, if you can believe it, but I’ve heard so much mention of it this year that I’m going to apply myself to watching it soon!)
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Thank you, Susanna! I had a lot of fun writing my entry this year. Thank you so much for putting on the contest again! Whenever you watch Hocus Pocus, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do 🙂
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So fun…I didn’t see the ‘stinking feet’ coming! 😆
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Thank you! 😋
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